Saturday, March 31, 2012

Final Guest Critique 3-29-12

Rebecca

    1) I can so totally see what you were talking about with the characters of your psyche with the less detailed creatures. With the ones that are detailed I can see a character and immediately start making a story for them.
    2) Think about how you want them presented.
    3) You can create a book for some of them with a story and then nothing for another. Let people guess why one has a past and the other doesn't
    4) I feel like they are out of Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter, they're animalistic with human qualities.


Russel

    1) You have an army now! I love the progression of the characters. You should make one with a lot of muscles.

(Russels favorite is the Bully ^_^)

Katherine McFarland

    1) You've got your own village now.
    2) I agree with not painting them and how you said that it would take away from the detail. However, I still think you should put a dot for the eyes to make them come alive.
    3) Some look evil and some look sweat and innocent, allow whatever world you see them in come alive and put them in it.
    4) Seeing them in a bigger group definitely makes them more village like and creative as well as child-like.
    5) Its great keep it up and think about the dots in the eyes.



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